Monday, April 21, 2008

The path leading to nowhere

In the mob there is a lad,
Lost and sober in his thought.
A will to fight, a flame to survive,

In the wilder of this life.

Came to the world with a smile,
Laughed and cried in impeccable bliss.
Toyed with books never in place,
Smiling in the arms of his fairy.

Learned to walk fumbling and mumbling,
Being ironically comic in the crowd.
Rosy cheeks pulled with tender hands,
Pampered yet punished to be mould.

Years passed and he grew up,
Wishing for roses in disguise.
Is there mist in his eyes,
Of the dreams in which he cried.

Twisted but weaved is his story,
Rusted but chiming is his glory.
From immense despair to a perfect bliss,
Wish him luck for walking path leading to nowhere.

8 Comments:

Blogger relativist said...

Somanchi u shud seriously strt think of this as an alternative in ur future.Amazing,i read it and took time to sink in..the lad is not spcll but very much like you me and other commoners...protecting something u wish not to lose in the crowd :)
Learned to walk fumbling and mumbling,
Being ironically comic in the crowd.
Rosy cheeks pulled with tender hands,
Pampered yet punished to be mould.

Twisted but weaved is his story,
Rusted but chiming is his glory.
From immense despair to a perfect bliss,
Wish him luck for walking path leading to nowhere.

these two stanza's blew my head apart :|
don't know how much time u had put in,but u r a really smart ass to put these things in simple words :)

1:22 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Am not thinking of an alternative in future, instead i will carry on with it as a passion and let my thoughts flow.
Happy to know that you liked it :-)

Keep Blogging !!

1:32 AM  
Blogger Prateek said...

hey somu da....seriously awesome blog....n sippy is rite u better start thinking of this as an alternative future

Twisted but weaved is his story,
Rusted but chiming is his glory.

these 2 lines r one of the finest things i have ever read....did u copyrite ur manuscript??....if no then seriously do it....keep bloging da....reading such blogs proves to be a jubilant experience.... :)

11:32 PM  
Blogger Absolutely Lost said...

Thanks buddy ... its a passion, and its better to keep it that ways :)

As far as copyright goes i own the copyright for the content of the blog, i dont think adding a copyright symbol would change anything :P. I will add a copyright line for the blog .. since you say so :) !!

Keep blogging

12:02 AM  
Blogger varun said...

people always leave

12:30 AM  
Blogger Absolutely Lost said...

But they do come back :)

12:48 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Nice Manchi, it certainly reverberated with my heart too,
possibly with most of the people
who have started thinking above bread and butter and have yet to understand
the nowhere...good and work and nice expression...

5:34 PM  
Blogger Absolutely Lost said...

thanks sirjee ...
happy to know that you liked it :)

10:37 PM  

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